And I say goodbye in Poetry
- Aug. 9, 2018, 9:15 p.m.
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The stars are just
A complicated mirage
Burning for desire
A passion breathing fire
And I will never reach
What the heavens
Hide in solitary peace
My eyes are silver
Trapped inside
The death of winter
A tortured soul on ice
As one tear
Foretells the story
Of my sacrifice
If only I had
A rose to smell
Just one last time
If only I had
One more kiss
Before I…
If only I had
Just some more time
Then I wouldn’t
Have said goodbye
Rejected by bliss
This life won’t miss
What it will soon forget
I’m just a grain
Of sand
Standing in a world
That will never understand
The secrets they hold
In the palm of their hands
Goodbye
Last updated January 03, 2019
DevilishlyInnocent ⋅ August 10, 2018
I did NOT expect you to sound like that. I expected you to sound...harsher?
These seems very fatalistic to me. Perhaps its me, but it almost sounds like a suicide thing.
Raphael Tiriel DevilishlyInnocent ⋅ August 15, 2018
I have actually been getting that a lot, lol. I am starting to find it interesting that my perception is a deception, lol, as in the way people see me versus who I am. Yes, my choice of suicide was to either describe how I would do it or the emotion that wants me to do it. So, I've killed myself a lot, lol. I am glad that you enjoy them.