here we go in addressing the public

  • Jan. 21, 2019, 11:46 p.m.
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here we go another song
another heart that i’ve done wrong
moody, brooding, and withdrawn
a sudden sorrow comes along

wish i wasn’t always right
wish i’d let you be my light
wish i’d keep you by my side
instead of merely in my sights

here we go another joke
another thing that wasn’t broke
fixed until it shook and smoked
for me to claim was unprovoked

wish i didn’t ask so much
that i was reeling from your touch
wish i’d see you as a crush
instead of as a loving crutch

here we go another sigh
another flicker in my eyes
the love i give, uncompromised
is nothing but a long goodbye

wish i thought a little less
that i were dumb and not depressed
wish i didn’t make you guess
if you’re the one i’m leaving next


Apple-Man January 22, 2019

You always have a way with endings.

LoveSuicide February 08, 2019

wish i thought a little less
that i were dumb and not depressed
wish i didn’t make you guess
if you’re the one i’m leaving next

Stood out from the rest, by far. I've always found the climax to be the best place to insert impact which leaves a lot of weight to that stanza and you delivered so well.

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