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A young submissive in story i am writing

  • Feb. 12, 2015, 10:19 p.m.
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Preface

My name is Jacqueline and I have long black hair with blue strikes in it. My eyes are frost green. I am a submissive.

When I was only 15 years old I fell into this life style. My father is a Domain, he is the top Dom in our community. I never meet my mom my did just says she left when i was 8 mouths old. When I was little I know there was a lot of people coming in and out all the time, there was always a party’s going on. But I did not know what any of it meant. Untell I became a submissive at 15.

The night I turned 15. There was a party people dressed like animals like always when there is a party. I know that this party was for me because it was my birthday. And I know this party was going to change my life because my father had put a costume just for me on my bed earlier that day. There was a note with it from my father.

Dear babygirl,

Today your life will change, today u become
a woman. A submissive in our community.
Tonight you will be asked to go to the
basement by Isaac. You will go with him
and do as he asks of you. Isaac will tell
you every thing that you need to know.
Remember that I love with all my heart.
You will all ways be
my babygirl.
Love your father,
Michelle
(Master M)

A cat costume kinda like all the other girls wear at this party’s. Was laying there. People started arriving. So I got dressed. I put on some black fishnets, a pretty purple skirt and a dark gray tank top and some Tigger ears and tail. As I got dress I realized that my life is going to be very different after tonight I realized that I will not be the same. I know that i become a submissive tonight. Everything that i know about this is what I have seen and I know that that’s not all of it I am afraid of what is to come for me tonight. I realized all of this then I went down stairs.

Chapter 1

Across the room I see Isaac. He is tall with saggy blond-brown hair and blue eyes. We grow up together we have known each other for a long time. His mom is a sub. My dads best friends submissive. He is 17 only two years older then me. I have always liked him more then just a friend but I could never tell him that.

He sees me and walks over to me.

Hi Jacqueline.

Hello Isaac.

I say in a shy voice because I know that it is not my place any more I know that this world is different and Isaac and I are not equal any more. And that scares me.

Come with me he says.

We walk to the door to the basement where I have seen many people go down there before. I have never been there before. I was never aloud to. My father has always said it was for the adults. As we walk down Isaac says.

Tonight I am to show you what a sub is, what they do and you are to know and act as a submissive and I am your domain now.

Isaac what are you talking about, I asked.

Blossom you are about to enter into a world that is much bigger then both of use are. I have been training my hale life to become a Dom because that is what my father is that is what I become tonight. Both of our worlds are changing.

What if I don’t want to be like those girls with the collars and leashes like like a pet?

Then you leave. You do not get to come back. You will have no home, your father will not have any thing to do with you. You will not be save you will have to work very hard for the rest of your life. Isaac tells me.

I did not realize it untell just then but I did have a better life then a lot of people I have every thing that I ever wanted. I have a very big home, very big bedroom, a big TV in it. I have a pet pit bull dog named Cookie. I have a rabbit named Piper and my own maid that takes care of every thing I tell her to do. Her name is Kara. Wow I guess I have it all. But I don’t know anyone else that has there on maid.

Wait is Kara a submissive? I asked Isaac.

Yes as long as she has been here she has been your father’s sub.

I did not know what to think.

How do you know all of this?

I asked as we have been standing in front of a door. I looked around and noticed there is a lot of doors down here.

Unlike your father my father has told me all of this and showed me a lot. About this world, Isaac say.

I think for a moment there is all a dream but I know I am awake.

Now I am going to show and teach you all about your role as a sub. I am going to have to hurt you a little.

Why I ask.

Its to put you in your place as sub. We will start small and it will only be a half hour for tonight.

He said as we walked in the the small room. He grabbed a paddle from a box in the corner of the room it was the only thing in this room. Besides what was on the wall, in big black bold letters it said step one, the paddle is to show you that you are now under your Dom you are not equal in any way at all. Ur world changes today.

Turn around and bend over.

I do as he says.

You are to do every thing that I say not just tonight but as long as you are in this community.

He said as he smacked my ass a little. A couple of times.

You are now may pet.

He says as he hits me a little harder.

I don’t know why I am letting him do this. My head is telling me to run to get out wall I can.

He stops for a moment and says

what is your save word? If this gets to hard for you to handily then you say your save word and I will stop.

Um I think for a second and say.

Um… my save word is cookies.

It seems fitting because I feel the safes when my dog Cookie is with me.

He started again and started paddling my butt again. It got harder and header to stand the pain.

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The next morning~

I am laying in , my bed with my dog Cookie. Trying to forget the pain on my ass. When there was a nock at the door.

Come in a yelled.

I know that you are most likely confused, Babygirl. Are you okay?

I will be say.

Your mom would not like that your I’m this now but I have no other chose people are paying for you to become a submissive.

Can’t you do any thing I say in a child like voice.

No hunny I can’t sorry.

I feel like his lying but I am not going to call him out on it.

I got you something for your birthday. I will be right back. He said smiling.


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