smile me not in Kellie's Stuff
- March 16, 2016, 1:52 p.m.
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young when I
still smile me not
just a sigh
then be forgot
young they say
can’t be this way
talk you will
can’t change the day
look I back
the teenage days
a smiling mask
a darkened haze
by the shore
on sunset gaze
the beauty’s lost
no warm felt rays
Looking back
swings open door
of memories
I wish no more
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Notdeadyet ⋅ March 16, 2016
Well thanks for brightening my day....
Another reason to keep a closer eye on you my friend.
invisible ink Notdeadyet ⋅ March 16, 2016
It's art dumbass not some dogmatic representation of my youth....
invisible ink Notdeadyet ⋅ March 16, 2016
You're such a melodramatic stoner...
Notdeadyet invisible ink ⋅ March 16, 2016
That's reformed stoner missy.
invisible ink Notdeadyet ⋅ March 16, 2016
I call horseshit on that my friend.
middle age pearl ⋅ March 18, 2016
The entry is amazing.
I must say that when I read through the notes and saw "horseshit" it immediately made me think of my mom. My mom hardly ever used any "bad" language back when I was growing up, but when she got really mad and disgusted, that was the word she said. Made me giggle just bit as that memory of mom using that word came rushing into my head.
colojojo ⋅ March 18, 2016