Swirl With Me (Audio) in Entries of Great Significance

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Swirl With Me (Audio File)

And sometimes the inspiration comes from not the urge to write, but the need to do so and feel so alive…

“Swirl With Me”

Swirl with me, darling.

Won’t you dance to me when I head toward the floor?

There are sparkling lights tonight, and within the gallows of mistakes, I feel them burning it all to the ground.

Fire is as cleansing as water, both can be so destructive and in different ways necessary for life to swirl on.

Cauterize those sad eyes, and look away when the moment turns heavy, and the mood sinks so lengthy when he – when he failed to be to you all that for him you were. Still are.

So swirl with me, darling.

Won’t you dance with me when I am smiling at you and swaying on the floor.

Think of all the pain you have shed, and when you pirouette, allow yourself to forget that gloom and let it all fall to the floor.

There are surging waves tonight, and within the swells of regret, I feel them washing them all into nevermore.

Water is as cleansing as fire, both can be so destructive, and in different ways necessary for life to swirl on.

Rinse those broken promises, and look within yourself when the moment turns weighty, and the mood sinks so gravely when he – when he failed to be to you all that for him you were.

And still are.

Swirl with me, darling.

Let us dance the night away, light this place ablaze with the every dip and sway of your sultry hips, your star-kissed lips, and that soul-stealing smile that when you flash it seems to wash away any heartache I have ever known.

I look into your pensive eyes.

I see beyond the color of your sky.

And I just want to swirl.

With you.

Brian Milici
October 14, 2015

Video Entry one entry back! It’s long, but some people found it amusing. Enjoy if that’s your thing. The audio recording is about 10 minutes long and contains a bunch of anecdotal stories about New Orleans, my sports teams, my friends, and such.

Favorite current song: ”Cecilia and the Satellite” by Andrew McMahon

Now, go get into some mischief you crazy kids. :)

May you always find your smile.


Last updated October 14, 2015


invisible ink October 14, 2015

Rock on my friend.....

LoveSuicide invisible ink ⋅ October 14, 2015

Thanks, man.

invisible ink LoveSuicide ⋅ October 15, 2015

interesting to hear your voice by the way..

LoveSuicide invisible ink ⋅ October 15, 2015

Hopefully it wasn't terrible! :)

invisible ink LoveSuicide ⋅ October 15, 2015

it was good.... I sure all the ladies were very impressed...

LoveSuicide invisible ink ⋅ October 16, 2015

lol, thanks, man.

I've gotten compliments for a long time on my voice, oddly. I don't get it, but have learned to accept others feel that way.

Jafael October 14, 2015

Lovely!

LoveSuicide Jafael ⋅ October 14, 2015

Thank you!

Sharee October 14, 2015

Rinse those broken promises, and look within yourself when the moment turns weighty, and the mood sinks so gravely when he – when he failed to be to you all that for him you were.

^Favorite part...reminds me of someone I knew.

I give your pronunciation of Louisville a 5/10---good effort. ;)

I'm in the middle of UK country, you'll see very little red around here. Jess's mom is a huge UofL fan, she has a red car with a cardinal on the antenna and a UofL license plate. Last time Jess was in town she borrowed her mom's car to come see me and the boys told her she couldn't park it in our driveway.

I went to UK for a bit, but I have no feelings one way or another for any team...more go sports, whatever. (But I do avoid wearing red on game days, people notice.)

LoveSuicide Sharee ⋅ October 14, 2015

Wait wait wait, but that's I'm pretty sure how the gal in L'ville pronounced it in the comment! I'm sure I'll be ridiculed and corrected again. I wanna get it down though! lol..

Whoa, so it's that rough there? She doesn't want her car damaged? heh.

Yeah, I can understand. Many of my friends are gamer nerds and not sports fans.

Sharee LoveSuicide ⋅ October 14, 2015

Well close, but you have to commit to the 'lewl' sound at the beginning a little more. I'll modify it to 7/10.

She wasn't worried about her car, the boys just don't want the neighbors thinking they're Cardinal fans. lol

I don't mind talking gamer stuff, but ask me who's playing in a ball game and I'll probably tell you the color of their jerseys.

LoveSuicide Sharee ⋅ October 15, 2015

Okay, so it's lewl-vuhl?

Would that be better and more accurate?

Haha, now that's dedication to avoid being mistaken for the opposite team's affection.

Hey, if you know the colors, I'd be impressed.

Sharee LoveSuicide ⋅ October 15, 2015

Possibly, I need to hear that out loud. lol

I know the colors when they're playing on TV and I can see them. ;-) I do know a lot college basketball teams though, Grannie always loved UK basketball so we watched a lot of games.

LoveSuicide Sharee ⋅ October 16, 2015

UK crushed my LSU Tigers quite regularly. That 30 point collapse still haunts me. We had UK! Had em! Ugh.

Sharee LoveSuicide ⋅ October 16, 2015

Haha, yeah. It's entertaining sometimes to see what they can pull out when it seems like they're done.

LoveSuicide Sharee ⋅ October 16, 2015

Says you, I hate UK basketball lol

Sharee LoveSuicide ⋅ October 16, 2015

Everyone not from here does. I'm used to it. (And I don't really care about basketball, so it doesn't hurt my feelings any! lol)

LoveSuicide Sharee ⋅ October 16, 2015

I know, so I said it lol.

But I pull for UK if LSU is done.

SEC pride and such.

Sharee LoveSuicide ⋅ October 16, 2015

I just cheer for whoever, if no one around me has a particular majority then I pick my fave color. I do like blue at least.

LoveSuicide Sharee ⋅ October 16, 2015

I love blue as well. Heh, I bet you'd win March Madness with your favored color pickings.

Sharee LoveSuicide ⋅ October 16, 2015

I'd say that's probably a good possibility.

LoveSuicide Sharee ⋅ October 16, 2015

You snarky badass.

Sharee LoveSuicide ⋅ October 16, 2015

Snarky is another fave word, mostly because it's fun to say.

LoveSuicide Sharee ⋅ October 16, 2015

Haha, I loathe that word but yet love it. Like a spice girls song.

Sharee LoveSuicide ⋅ October 16, 2015

I think I have a Spice Girls CD somewhere. I was listening to Alanis Morissette and Fiona Apple the other day, Spice Girls were alright but not angsty enough. lol

LoveSuicide Sharee ⋅ October 16, 2015

Fiona Apple? You're a damn criminal! ;)

That video was hot.

I need a shower. lol.

Sharee LoveSuicide ⋅ October 16, 2015

Back when music videos were awesome. Good days...

LoveSuicide Sharee ⋅ October 16, 2015

Yeah, who watches them now anyways?

Oh, f'n YouTubers...

ducks

Sharee LoveSuicide ⋅ October 16, 2015

Yeah, the kid does that. It's not their fault, I guess, that they don't have MTV or VH1 for actual music...

LoveSuicide Sharee ⋅ October 16, 2015

I used to prefer VH1 back in the day to MTV!

Sharee LoveSuicide ⋅ October 16, 2015

Soon...are you watching Big Blue Madness? ;-)

LoveSuicide Sharee ⋅ October 16, 2015

ugh. I can't stomach it. This early season NCAA basketball is nonsense. Is it even midnight yet?! Isn't it midnight madness?!

LoveSuicide Sharee ⋅ October 16, 2015

ugh. I can't stomach it. This early season NCAA basketball is nonsense. Is it even midnight yet?! Isn't it midnight madness?!

Sharee LoveSuicide ⋅ October 16, 2015

Dude it's madness all day long here. People camp out for a week for these free tickets and then sell them for hundreds of dollars. It's insane.

LoveSuicide Sharee ⋅ October 23, 2015

LSU will be better than Kentucky in basketball this year. Watch :)

Sharee LoveSuicide ⋅ October 23, 2015

/shrug If you say so. It's all the same to me. ;-)

masquerade~ October 16, 2015

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