twilight in Words that Rhyme
- Nov. 3, 2015, 3 p.m.
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twilight isn’t day or night
It’s just the dark when there is light
it isn’t black and never white
not time for bed but it is in sight
this is when the sun will set
radiant reds and purple’s get
in dimming skies lest we forget
that yester and the morrow’s met
romantic yes as sun goes down
curl up close and arms around
kissing cures day drudges frown
as evening lights cast about the town
twilight’s best for one as me
doesn’t blind but hard to see
the bitter world’s worse travesty
just fades to dark and never be.....
Last updated November 03, 2015
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Deleted user ⋅ November 03, 2015
You are quite talented.
invisible ink Deleted user ⋅ November 03, 2015
Well thank you....
Mr. Mofo ⋅ November 03, 2015
Twilight is also when Vlad Dracula slaps the crap out of that sparkly, emo, wanna be vampire.
invisible ink Mr. Mofo ⋅ November 03, 2015
vanghoul for sure..
invisible ink Mr. Mofo ⋅ November 03, 2015
or for the zombie impaired... fang -ghoul
Deleted user ⋅ November 03, 2015
Lovely; I hope you come and read my poetry as well.
invisible ink Deleted user ⋅ November 03, 2015
I just was....ironically
Deleted user invisible ink ⋅ November 03, 2015
Hahha that is funny. Well just so u know. I am starting a publushing company. I will be looking for new talent if u r interested but it will be after my first book. I wanna usher in a new era of the arts and let it transform our imagination.
invisible ink Deleted user ⋅ November 03, 2015
You discussion of time as relative to human perception is interesting.
Deleted user invisible ink ⋅ November 03, 2015
Why interest u on my concept of time?
invisible ink Deleted user ⋅ November 03, 2015
Well as I sit at my desk looking at Einstein's books "Relativity. The Special and the General. The Quotable Einstein Einstein's Universe (Nigel Calder) ... not to mention Bhagavad Gita... and a few other less than mainstream looks at the universe and how it is seen as functioning it may hint at my interest when one lends opinion to how it all works.... I declare no great knowledge just an unending interest of the big picture and the printed word surrounding the philosophies over an extended period of time....comparative examinations if you will...
Deleted user invisible ink ⋅ November 03, 2015
Interesting so do I. What is ur sign. I am a Virgo with a Gemini rising and a Libra Moon.
invisible ink Deleted user ⋅ November 03, 2015
cancer. I must admit I do not follow any astrological typing regarding predictive eventing. Karmic and radiant influences is what I am all about.
Deleted user invisible ink ⋅ November 03, 2015
Cancer r vey very emotional. U need an emotional release or u will get angry or depressed.
invisible ink Deleted user ⋅ November 03, 2015
I am not saying they have no value merely I haven't studied it and therefore don't pay much mind to it.
Deleted user invisible ink ⋅ November 03, 2015
Its all gut.
invisible ink Deleted user ⋅ November 03, 2015
I will spend time looking at your posts. I did look over how many times I can post fuck in an entry.... didn't sound very fun....
Deleted user invisible ink ⋅ November 03, 2015
Lol was my fick entry good.
invisible ink Deleted user ⋅ November 04, 2015
Well it was difficult. One the one hand all the swearing was humorous but what you are/were going through in your personal affairs was anything but funny
Deleted user invisible ink ⋅ November 03, 2015
*fuck
middle age pearl ⋅ November 03, 2015
I really really like this!!
invisible ink middle age pearl ⋅ November 03, 2015
thanks!
Skikkles911 ⋅ November 03, 2015
You are so amazing at writing ahfjushgkjr
Can I tell you again to publish a poetry book?
invisible ink Skikkles911 ⋅ November 03, 2015
I'm still trying to figure out ahfjushgkjr as I know you are up to something my clever friend but after a day in the salt minds I am at a loss and the brain has said pass on overthinking.... clarify please.... oh and thank you.....
Skikkles911 invisible ink ⋅ November 03, 2015
It's keyboard smashing of "no other words are fitting here" XD
Leanne 🌈 ⋅ November 03, 2015
Tea and Sympathy ⋅ November 05, 2015
While this is completely different, it made me think of a song. https://youtu.be/qOhRZffHAw4
Take care. ~Randi
invisible ink Tea and Sympathy ⋅ November 05, 2015
Thanks for stopping I'll check out the video for sure
Tea and Sympathy invisible ink ⋅ November 05, 2015
I mostly just like the lyrics to the song. :) thought you might like them too.
Hope you have a lovely day. /wave ~Randi
Deleted user ⋅ November 05, 2015
very good
colojojo ⋅ November 05, 2015
you have a way with words :)
invisible ink colojojo ⋅ November 05, 2015
well thank you....
LoveSuicide ⋅ November 12, 2015
Tremendous opening and closing stanzas. I didn't think you could beat the opening, but I think I love the closer best. Which is often what I enjoy about writing. Awesome, man.