vampiress kiss in Things Previously Written
- Oct. 13, 2015, 9:31 a.m.
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talons deep within my heart
take all I love away
shred what’s good of me apart
then goes upon her way
soulless wretch who lives love scorned
then drown within her sorrow
turns the love she touched forlorned
no wish to see tomorrow
insidious viper, parasitic whore
she dwells within the night
fangs sunk deep til blood’s no more
then flees the morning light
horrid is the life she spares
to dies of her affliction
vampiress kiss of lady fair
death lives through her addiction
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Leanne 🌈 ⋅ October 13, 2015
WhatDreamsMayCome ⋅ October 13, 2015
You can paint a picture.
invisible ink WhatDreamsMayCome ⋅ October 15, 2015
thank you...
Waiting For Sunrise ⋅ October 13, 2015
This feels really intense... hidden in mythical imagery, but born of pain...
Skikkles911 ⋅ October 14, 2015
Yeeess~
LoveSuicide ⋅ October 14, 2015
insidious viper, parasitic whore
she dwells within the night
fangs sunk deep til blood’s no more
then flees the morning light
That is outstanding. Truly fantastic. The tempo definitely builds and then gives you a punch at the end, which I adore.
invisible ink LoveSuicide ⋅ October 15, 2015
Thanks LS...appreciate it
LoveSuicide invisible ink ⋅ October 15, 2015
Just the truth, my man:)
colojojo ⋅ October 17, 2015
<3