Would someone be willing to read this and give me feedback on it? in Telling It Like It Is

Okay, so I haven’t been here in a while because I’ve been busy trying to combat bills and life and all the in between, but, I wrote a screenplay, this is a screenplay for my first feature film that I plan to be directing but this is not my first time directing a film period.

Anyway, the screenplay is about strangers from different, racial clashing backgrounds being forced to work together to survive the horrific elements surrounding them. It’s a screenplay that sets out to bring attention to police brutality and corruption and the racism that those of all races face on all sides and it’s a drama/thriller genre story.

I’m looking for someone to read it, just to get their feedback on the overall story, as if they were watching it on the big screen, in a movie theatre, so I thought I’d come here and ask if I can get feedback on the story from an regular person’s POV. So would anyone be willing to read it and give me some feedback on it? If so, please comment below. Thanks.