newbie217 ⋅ 33 ⋅
Mom, RN, new to writing
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December 26, 2022
Glowing like a fire in Need feedback.. let me know if I suck
When we met I didn’t even know that I would feel this way but you had a knowing look in your eyes. The sweet way you said hello. The sweet, intentional compliments. You were mine already, and I w...
December 14, 2022
Please don't let me die in Need feedback.. let me know if I suck
Your eyes beg me. Your soft hand squeezes mine. HARD. You are sweating and panting just from the effort of breathing. “Please don’t let me die” You won’t last much longer. You are only 34. Your ...
December 10, 2022
I don't know you in Need feedback.. let me know if I suck
I don’t know you. I don’t know if you like chocolate or vanilla ice cream. Or that you like to garden. I don’t know that you are best friends with your neighbors. I don’t know that you used to be...
