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Freezing Flame

by Han Smada

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March 23, 2016

Unfinished First Draft

My nostrils sting. My eyes flare. I look upon my city, my kingdom, my people, and watch as they burn. I stare unable to look away, unable to speak, unable to save them. The kingdom of Sabri h...


Book Description

This is a short story that I have been working on for an English class and I want feed back on how it’s going so far. Thanks.